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A process diagram shows how a product is manufactured, recycled, or reused.

A process diagram shows how a product is manufactured, recycled, or reused. lRp69

The given diagram illustrates the methods by which instant noodles are manufactured. Overall, it is apparent that there are a total of 8 stages in this process, commencing with storing flour in silos and culminating in labeling and sealing cups. The process initiates with flour being pumped from a truck into two silo towers for storage. Subsequently, the flour is sent to a mixer, where it is blended with a combination of water and oil. The next stage is rolling over the mixture repeatedly to form dough sheets and then the sheets are stripped into separate narrow and long pieces. In the fifth stage of the process, these strips are moulded into many noodles discs which are then cooked in oil and left for drying. After that, vegetables and spices are added with these dried noodles discs after which they are put into different cups. Finally, the process concludes with the cups being labeled and sealed.

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 diagram illustrates the methods by which instant noodles are manufactured
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sent
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 with a combination of water and oil. The next
 stage is rolling over the mixture repeatedly
 to form dough sheets and then the sheets are stripped
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added
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different
 cups. Finally
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