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E) The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map compares the changes in the town of Langley in 1910 to that of 1950. Overall, there has been a tremendous change in the last four decades whereas the factory, railway workers cottages, and the wasteland cease to exist in the year 1950. Firstly, the laundry and cafe which were to the east of the Sherman Street now have been moved to the northeast side of the town, which used to be a wasteland. On the contrary, the factories have been replaced by a huge Sherman Mansion which is towards the north. Following this, the wasteland on the south, in 1910 was later constructed into a park which has a children’s play area just beside the new lane, similarly, on the other side of the lane, there are 3 new stores which have been built. Finally, towards the west side, on Jordan Street, which had small houses in 1910, after 40 years, have been upgraded to new buildings which have apartments.

The map compares the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the town of Langley in 1910 to that of 1950.

Overall
, there has been a tremendous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the last four decades whereas the factory, railway workers cottages, and the wasteland cease to exist in the year 1950.

Firstly
, the laundry and ‘cafe’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “café”café
cafe
 which were to the east of the Sherman Street This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the northeast side of the town, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be a wasteland. On the contrary
, the factories have been replaced
 by a huge Sherman Mansion which is towards the north.

Following this, the wasteland on the south, in 1910 was later constructed into a park which has a children’s play area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 beside the new lane, similarly
, on the other side of the lane, there are 3 new stores which have been built
. Finally
, towards the west side, on Jordan Street, which had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 in 1910, after 40 years, have been upgraded
 to new buildings which have apartments. 