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An average of using energy in some terms of Australian families is showed in the first pie chart, followed by the proportion of thr greenhouse gas emissions as a result in the rest chart.

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An average of using energy in some terms of Australian families is showed in the first pie chart, followed by the proportion of thr greenhouse gas emissions as a result in the rest chart. It is noticeable that heating and water heating are two types having the most using. However, only water heating makes up the highest proportion of gas emission and the second is other appliances. Australian use 40% of energy in heating and 30% in water heating. While the pecentage of lighting and cooling just stand at below 5%, the figure of other appliances is higher at 15%. Even though energy use of heating is the highest, its emissions is far less likely about two times. Exhausting produced by cooling and water heating conduct approximately similar numer of using energy. Figure for others release more than twice consumption, followed by lighting at 8%, refrigeration at 15% and other appliances at 28%
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greenhouse gas emissions
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are two types having the most using.
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up the highest proportion of gas emission and the second is
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Australian
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. While the
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stand at below 5%, the figure of
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appliances is higher at 15%.

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is the highest, its emissions is far less likely about two times. Exhausting produced by cooling and
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conduct approximately similar
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. Figure for others release more than twice consumption, followed by lighting at 8%, refrigeration at 15% and
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IELTS academic An average of using energy in some terms of Australian families is showed in the first pie chart, followed by the proportion of thr greenhouse gas emissions as a result in the rest chart.

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