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discuss different companies in term of women

discuss different companies in term of women 3YpGX

the given table chart depicts the aggregate number of women's participating in senior management in three diverse companies from 1975 to 2015. It is clear from the graph that there was a contradiction in the ratio between the three companies. According to what is shown, elden ltd had the largest alteration in this period as it increased by 63 percent in the year 2015 which holds the highest ratio. Apart from this, in 1975 bamforth ltd had 9 % of their workforce are women's, afterward in the next five years it witnessd a slight increment started from 11 percent in 1980 and peacked up to reach 46 percent at the end of interval. Finsbury ltd, on the other hand, were at the 16 marks which comprised the highest proportion in 1975 although five years later, most of finsbury ltd ratio didn't show much modification in the 40 years, it experienced a modest increase by 10 percent by the end of 2015. To sum up, looking to the total ratio eldan ltd was by far the most dominant compared with others.

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 table chart depicts the aggregate number of women's participating in senior management in three diverse This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
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 from the graph that there was a contradiction in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withratescaleproportionquota
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