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The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Lwa0n

The line graph demonstrates different average daily temperatures throughout the year for Auckland and Christchurch, New Zealand and London and Edinburgh, United Kingdom. Auckland and Christchurch both recorded warmer temperatures during January and February of 24 degree and 23 degree respectively. The temperatures in both cities then dropped steadily, reaching a low of 15 degree in Auckland in July and 11 degree in Christchurch in July and August before beginning to rise back up to over 20 degree in December. In contrast, the data for London and Edinburgh shows a temperature slightly above 5 degree during January, prior to climbing to a peak of about 23 degree during July in London and approximately 18 degree in Edinburgh during the same month. The temperatures for both cities then fall to around 7 degree and 6 degree in December respectively. Overall, the average daily maximum temperatures of the two cities in New Zealand present completely the opposite pattern to the two Bristish.

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