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Discuss about the Life cycle of a frog

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The given diagram illustrates the growth stages of a frog in its life cycle. Overall, before starting its life as an adult frog on land, every frog undergoes many developmental phases inside the water from egg to tadpole then into an adult. Firstly, the life cycle of a frog is started from eggs inside the water then it developed into an embryo. from the embryo, a small tadpole comes out and it had three grown stages. After this stage, the tadpole increased in size and it developed its front legs. Furtherly, in the next stage of the frog's life, it started the pulmonary breathing and it is the final stage of its growth inside the water. Secondly, the tadpole frog is the stage which is the first stage on the land in the growth cycle of a frog after this stage it completely transformed into an adult frog.
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in its
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Overall
,
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before
starting its
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life
as an adult
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frog
on land, every
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undergoes
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developmental phases inside the water from egg to
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tadpole
then into an adult.
Firstly
, the
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cycle of a
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frog
is
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started
from eggs inside the water then it developed into an embryo.
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from
the embryo, a
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small
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tadpole
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comes
out and it had three grown
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stages
. After this
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, the
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tadpole
increased in size and it developed its front legs.
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Furtherly
, in the
next
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stage
of the frog's
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life
, it
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started
the pulmonary breathing and it is the final
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stage
of its growth inside the water.

Secondly
, the
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tadpole
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frog
is the
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stage
which is the
first
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stage
on the land in the growth cycle of a
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frog
after this
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it completely transformed into an adult
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IELTS academic Discuss about the Life cycle of a frog

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148 words
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