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Single-parent families have certain bad sides. Living in a single parent family is living in an emotionally incomplete family. They will be deprived of the love of their father or mother. This can lead to psychological effects on the child. They may feel jealous of their friends or teased by their friends, feel lonely, embarrassed, and different from those around them. It can even lead to other dangers that no one can foresee. Meanwhile, single parents may feel the same way. They may also feel ashamed or jealous of those around them. In life, they will not have a spouse to share joys and sorrows together, take care of children together, and enjoy life together like other couples. They also have the additional financial burden of having to bring up their children on their own, unable to allocate time to work and take care of their children.
Single-parent families have certain
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sides. Living in a single parent family is living in an
emotionally
incomplete family. They will
be deprived
of the
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love
of their father or mother. This can lead to psychological effects on the child. They may
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feel
jealous of their friends or teased by their friends,
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lonely, embarrassed, and
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different
from those around them. It can even lead to other
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dangers
that no one can foresee. Meanwhile, single parents may
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feel
the same way. They may
also
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ashamed or jealous of those around them. In life, they will not have a spouse to share joys and sorrows together, take care of children together, and enjoy life together like other couples. They
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have the additional financial burden of having to bring up their children on their
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, unable to allocate time to work and take care of their children.
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IELTS academic disadvantage of single parent

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