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This graph shows a diagram of the process of discounting in a company.

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This graph shows a diagram of the process of discounting in a company. The process shows whether it qualifies to apply for a discount or not. Firstly the company receives a purchase order and it is qualified if it meets the requirements to get a discount. In a case of not meeting the condition the order is added to the system company. However the order that meets the condition the discount will be applied and then the order is added to the system company. When the order is not current it is posiblet offered discount in the next order then the order is added to the system company. Finally the order is shipped and changed.
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a diagram of the process of discounting in a
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. The process
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whether it qualifies to apply for a
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discount
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receives a
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purchase
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added
to the system
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company
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However
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be applied
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is
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company
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