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A Simplified Version of the Ordering Process used by One Company

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The diagram illustrates the process of classifying an order from a client, using a platform of dates. The flow is simple, only use the option of (yes or no) to receive the order, depending on the client, if it is current or new in the platform. This is important because the platform needs to know if the client is currently offering a little discount, if no, just receive and process the order. First of all the order is received after that, the system evaluates if the order is from the current client to apply for a discount, if not, only the order is processed and the cliente must fill in the information about him and finally the company packs and sends.
The diagram illustrates the process of classifying an
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order
from a
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client
, using a platform of dates.

The flow is simple,
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only
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use
the option of (yes or no) to receive the
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order
, depending on the
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client
, if it is
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current
or new in the platform. This is
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important
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the platform needs to know if the
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client
is
currently
offering a
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little
discount, if no,
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just
receive and process the order.

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the
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order
is received
after that, the system evaluates if the
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order
is from the
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current
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client
to apply for a discount, if not,
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only
the
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order
is processed
and the
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cliente
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must
fill in the information about him and
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company
packs and
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sends
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IELTS academic A Simplified Version of the Ordering Process used by One Company

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