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This graph give information about the process of company

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This graph give information about the process of company when they got order from clients. The first time when the companies got the order if it's the currently order the discount process will apply and client can be shipped and charged in the same time. While it they not currently client the process must go to add information for client before apply to order. The difference between old client and currently client is time to process for the order, but the same thing. Finally clients can got object
This graph give information about the
process
of
company
when they
got
order
from clients.

The
first
time when the
companies
got
the
order
if it's the
currently
order
the discount
process
will apply and
client
can
be shipped
and charged in the same time. While
it
they not
currently
client
the
process
must
go to
add
information for
client
before
apply to order.

The difference between
old
client
and
currently
client
is time to
process
for the
order
,
but
the same thing.
Finally
clients
can
got
object
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