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The diagram below depicts the development of cutting tools that were used in the stone age. One of these was made 1.4 million years ago and the other one approximately 800 years ago. (The diagram shows the front, side, and back view of the tool.) Summarize all the important points including the main features and also make comparisons wherever necessary.

The diagram below depicts the development of cutting tools that were used in the stone age. One of these was made 1. 4 million years ago and the other one approximately 800 years ago. (The diagram shows the front, side, and back view of the tool. ) Summarize all the important points including the main features and also make comparisons wherever necessary. qLP1D
The figure delineates the front view, side view and back view of the prehistoric rock tools of two distinct periods from 1. 4 million years ago and 800000 years ago. Overall, 1. 4 million years ago the tools used were unpolished and irregular shaped whereas in 0. 8 million years ago there has a tremendous change in tools, which was smoothed and sharpened. As is seen, 1. 4 million years ago, the evolution of tools had an improper pattern that seems to be used directly after etched from rocks. Whereby, the top and bottom edges were rounded. Moreover, the front and back view depicts an irregular form of stone carving with numerous cracks and bulging. Besides that, the side view shows the thickness of the tool which is unevenly dispersed. That is, the top and bottom were tapered while the middle portion was wider. Furthermore, the length of the tool from the crest to the centre was being 5 cm. On the flip side, the developed version of the tool in 0. 8 million years ago as compared to past tools. The newer tool was highly progressive with sharper top edges and a smoothly curved bottom. Apart from this, the front impression which resembles a teardrop was chiselled with precision for procuring a polished touch. Moreover, the back portion was etched to obtaining an almost similar front view. In addition, the side views Ostended the exact picture of the tool, which was scrapped for obtaining glossily, from the top having a sharped tip, enlarged middle portion and toward the bottom it's narrowing. However, the length of the diameter was kept as same as in the past tools as 5 cm.
The figure delineates the
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front
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view
, side
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view
and back
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view
of the prehistoric rock
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tools
of two distinct periods from 1. 4
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million
years ago and 800000 years ago.

Overall
, 1. 4
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million
years ago the
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tools
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used
were unpolished
and irregular shaped whereas in 0. 8
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million
years ago there has a tremendous
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change
in
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tools
, which
was smoothed
and sharpened.

As is
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seen
, 1. 4
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million
years ago, the evolution of
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tools
had an improper pattern that seems to be
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used
directly
after etched from rocks. Whereby, the
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top
and bottom edges
were rounded
.
Moreover
, the
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front
and back
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view
depicts an irregular form of stone carving with numerous cracks and bulging.
Besides
that, the side
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view
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shows
the thickness of the
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tool
which is
unevenly
dispersed.
That is
, the
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top
and bottom
were tapered
while the middle portion was wider.
Furthermore
, the length of the
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tool
from the crest to the
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centre
was being 5 cm.

On the flip side, the developed version of the
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tool
in 0. 8
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million
years ago as compared to past
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tools
. The newer
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tool
was
highly
progressive with sharper
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top
edges and a
smoothly
curved bottom. Apart from this, the
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front
impression which resembles a teardrop was
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chiselled
with precision for procuring a polished touch.
Moreover
, the back portion
was etched
to obtaining an almost similar
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front
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view
.
In addition
, the side
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views
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Ostended
the exact picture of the
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tool
, which
was scrapped
for obtaining
glossily
, from the
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top
having a sharped tip, enlarged middle portion and toward the bottom it's narrowing.
However
, the length of the diameter was
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kept
as same as in the past
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tools
as 5 cm.

IELTS academic The diagram below depicts the development of cutting tools that were used in the stone age. One of these was made 1. 4 million years ago and the other one approximately 800 years ago. (The diagram shows the front, side, and back view of the tool. ) Summarize all the important points including the main features and also make comparisons wherever necessary.

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  • The diagram below depicts the development of cutting tools that were used in the stone age. One of these was made 1.4 million years ago and the other one approximately 800 years ago. (The diagram shows the front, side, and back view of the tool.) Summarize all the important points including the main features and also make comparisons wherever necessary.