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diagram which illustrates how often people in Great Britain use different kind of transport

diagram which illustrates how often people in Great Britain use different kind of transport 2br6X

First picture is a line diagram which illustrates how often people in Great Britain use different kind of transport. Second diagram based on time which we spend on housework. Next picture shows the size of families and the last one connected with people’s fitness activity. First one compares cars with buses and rail. Second picture shows the difference between men and women in spending time for housework. In the third picture we see what family size is more common. Fourth diagram likens together groups of people of different ages and how often they spent time on sports activity. The line diagram based on total number of kilometers for different types of transport. The second diagram, obviously, shows the average time for all men and all women. The pie-diagram uses proportions since we don’t see any specific numbers. The last diagram shows the percentages and we know it because it is written in the diagram. The first diagram relates to long period of time from 1952 to 2002 years. The pie diagram shows only one 2003 year and both charts based on couple years 2000 and 2001.

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first
 diagram relates to long period of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 from 1952 to 2002 years. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 pie diagram You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpageantparadefairappearanceprogramspectacle
shows
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 one 2003 year and both charts based on couple years 2000 and 2001. 