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The table illustrates the amount of milk produced in four different countries, namely Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010

The table illustrates the amount of milk produced in four different countries, namely Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010 70jN6
The table illustrates the amount of milk produced in four different countries, namely Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in liters. Overall, there was an increase in milk production in the Netherlands, Tanzania, and Guatemala, while the opposite trend was true for Australia. In addition, the Netherlands consistently had the highest figure throughout the period. The production of milk in the Netherlands started at 11, 262, 000 liters in 1990, followed by a slight decrease to 11, 155, 000 liters in 10 years‘ time. The figure for Guatemala was about 26, 000 liters before experiencing a gradual growth to 55, 000 liters in 2000. In the last period, the amount of milk produced grew significantly to 11, 466, 000 liters and 84, 000 liters in the Netherlands and Guatemala respectively. 11, 246, 000 liters of milk produced in Australia, with a subsequent decline to 11, 105, 000 liters in 2000, after which it dropped tremendously to 9, 165, 000 liters. By contrast, the figure for Tanzania was at 87, 000 liters and witnessed a dramatic climb to 84, 000 liters in 2010.
The table illustrates the amount of
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produced in four
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different
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Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010. Units
are measured
in liters.

Overall
, there was an increase in
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milk
production in the Netherlands, Tanzania, and Guatemala, while the opposite trend was true for Australia.
In addition
, the Netherlands
consistently
had the highest figure throughout the period.

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milk
in the Netherlands
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started
at 11, 262, 000 liters in 1990, followed by a slight decrease to 11, 155, 000 liters in 10 years‘ time. The figure for Guatemala was about 26, 000 liters
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before
experiencing a gradual growth to 55, 000 liters in 2000. In the last period, the amount of
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milk
produced grew
significantly
to 11, 466, 000 liters and 84, 000 liters in the Netherlands and Guatemala
respectively
.

11, 246, 000 liters of
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milk
produced in Australia, with a subsequent decline to 11, 105, 000 liters in 2000, after which it dropped
tremendously
to 9, 165, 000 liters. By contrast, the figure for Tanzania was at 87, 000 liters and witnessed a dramatic climb to 84, 000 liters in 2010.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the amount of milk produced in four different countries, namely Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala from 1990 to 2010

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