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The single Caribbean island visted by numerous of tourists from year 2010 to 2017 is dipicted from graph. In an overview, The total number of tourists incline at constant rate and appeared rapid climb in last year. However other took ups and downs, ending up increased at last. At the fleeting glance, visitors staying on cruise ships had least population. In a year, the stable increase assisted them ending up over visitors staying on island with half million. Visitors staying on island started from three quarters of million with rapid growth to 1. 5 million. Moreover, In year 2015, the little downfall observed but retained similar visitors at last. Moving further, Total temperiory resistance was beside from their alternatives. In 2010, the tourists were a million that keep incline from year to 2015 as well as mostly visitors travelled in modest way, in the particular year seemed gradual decrease also observed nevertheless at ladt year sky rocket increase took them to the number of 3. 5 million travellers.
The single Caribbean island
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visted
by numerous of tourists from
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year
2010 to 2017 is
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dipicted
from graph.

In an overview, The total number of tourists incline at constant rate and appeared rapid climb in last
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year
.
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However
other took ups and downs, ending up increased at last.

At the fleeting glance,
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visitors
staying on cruise ships had
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least
population. In a
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year
, the stable increase assisted them ending up over
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visitors
staying on island with half
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million
.
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Visitors
staying on island
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started
from three quarters of
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million
with rapid growth to 1. 5
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million
.
Moreover
, In
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year
2015, the
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little
downfall observed
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but
retained similar
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visitors
at last.

Moving
further
, Total
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temperiory
resistance was beside from their alternatives. In 2010, the tourists were a
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million
that
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keep
incline from
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year
to 2015
as well
as
mostly
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visitors
travelled in modest way, in the particular
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year
seemed gradual decrease
also
observed
nevertheless
at
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ladt
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year
sky rocket increase took them to the number of 3. 5
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million
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travellers
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4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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