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The city that I like the most is Ha Noi since it is still steeped in tradition. There are many historical sites which are attractive many people from around the world to visit such as One Pillar Pagoda, HoanKiem Lake, and The Temple of Literature. Although the streets are always crowded with people from various provinces, the Hanoians lifestyle is still slower than other cities. Bat Trang Pottery, Van Phuc Silk Village, and Dong Ho Folk Painting are merely a few of the traditional craft villages that help to make Ha Noi more ancient. Futhermore, we easily can observe street vendors who are considered as the unique of HaNoi culture on a number of city's streets. When I think of Ha Noi, those tiny things are abundance to take me back to my childhood.
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historical sites which are attractive
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Lake, and The Temple of Literature. Although the streets are always crowded with
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people
from various provinces, the
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lifestyle is
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Pottery, Van
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Silk Village, and Dong Ho Folk Painting are
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make
Ha
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more ancient.
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, we
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culture on a number of city's streets. When I
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of Ha
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, those tiny things are abundance to take me back to my childhood.
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