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describe the process cherry jam

describe the process cherry jam 6KPOj

The diagram demonstrate the process of preparing cherry jam. There are eight main stages in the process, begining with collecting fresh cherry, clearn cherry with water, cook with some ingredients and ending with put into jars, stick on the jarsFirst, you prepare a sheet is spread on the ground and the tree is shaded to get the cherries, After that, the cherries are collected and are transported to the processing plant. The leaves and stem are removed, the cherries are cleaned by water, Next with the stone is taken out of the middle of the cherry The next stage, the cherries are cooked and extra ingredients are added, Then, the quality of the jam is checked, The jam is puted into jars. Finally a label is stucked on the jars

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demonstrate
 the process of preparing cherry jam. There are eight main stages in the process, Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 with collecting fresh cherry, Possible spelling mistake found.clearlearncleanClaireClairclears
clearn
 cherry with water, cook with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 ingredients and ending with put into jars, stick on the Possible spelling mistake found.marshiest
jarsFirst
, you prepare a sheet is spread
 on the ground and the tree is shaded
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
, After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are collected
 and are transported
 to the processing plant. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and stem are removed
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are cleaned
 by water, Next
 with the stone is taken
 out of the middle of the cherry The next
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are cooked
 and extra ingredients are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
, Then, the quality of the jam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
, The jam is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "put", the past tense form of the verb 'put'?putmutedoutedpuntedputtedpuked
puted
 into jars. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 a label is Possible spelling mistake found.stackedstockedsuckedtuckedshuckeds tucked
stucked
 on the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphjars.jars!jars?jars:jars,jars;
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