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Describe the map below in 150 words

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The map demonstrates how the village of Freton altered after a 22-year period, starting from 1990. At first glance, we can see that the town witnessed considerable changes. One remarkable thing is that it was transformed from a small township to a residential area. The most noticeable modification is the appearance of blocks of flats which instead for playing fields with friends and houses. Nonetheless, there were a new flats on the northeast next to the Hight Street. As is shown in the map,
The map demonstrates how the village of
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Freton
altered after a 22-year period, starting from 1990.

At
first
glance, we can
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see
that the town witnessed considerable
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changes
. One remarkable thing is that it
was transformed
from a
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small
township to a residential area.

The most noticeable modification is the appearance of blocks of flats which
instead
for playing fields with friends and
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houses
. Nonetheless, there were a new
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flats
on the northeast
next
to the
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Hight
Street. As
is shown
in the map,

IELTS academic Describe the map below in 150 words

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3 paragraphs
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