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Describe the map about Frenton below in 150 words

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The map demonstrates how the village of Brenton altered after a 22-year period, starting from 1990. At first glance, we can see that the town witnessed considerable changes. One remarkable thing is that it was transformed from a tiny township to a residential area. The most noticeable modification is the appearance of blocks of flats which instead for playing fields with friends and houses. Nonetheless, there were new flats on the northeast next to the High Street. As is shown in the map,
The map demonstrates how the village of Brenton altered after a 22-year period, starting from 1990.

At
first
glance, we can
see
that the town witnessed considerable
changes
. One remarkable thing is that it
was transformed
from a tiny township to a residential area.

The most noticeable modification is the appearance of blocks of flats which
instead
for playing fields with friends and
houses
. Nonetheless, there were new flats on the northeast
next
to the High Street. As
is shown
in the map,
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IELTS academic Describe the map about Frenton below in 150 words

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