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The data for sport viewership

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The given table provides certain data about sport viewership in four different countries namely Australia UK USA and Canada. In the main, citizen in these countries are apt to watch tennis and golf. In addition people in UK together with USA has a substantial number of sport viewership comparing to two remaining countries. According to the statistics shown, it’s Patent that the amount of viewers for tennis and golf in USA made up the most significant portion in total respectively 7 millions and 11, 2 millions. In the main, there is a minimal unequal number of tennis viewership which is approximately fewer than 7 millions for each countries. In converse, golf viewers, which has the visible disparity comparing to that of three remaining countries, is 11, 2 millions of viewers. The opposite was true for motor racing and athletics. The total number of motoracing viewership is the least one which is 0, 5 times fewer than that of tennis. In the US. The is the most considerable people watching motor racing in its category comparing to the total numbers of three remaining countries. In terms of athletics, it can be seen a marginal disproportion of each four countries contribution altogether. Meanwhile the highest data provided for this category is 5, 5 millions in USA
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table provides certain data about sport viewership in four
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countries
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Australia UK USA and Canada. In the main, citizen in these
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countries
are apt to
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watch
tennis and golf. In
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addition
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people
in UK together
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with USA
has a substantial
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number
of sport viewership comparing to two remaining
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countries
. According to the statistics shown, it’s Patent that the amount of viewers for tennis and golf
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in USA
made up the most significant portion in total
respectively
7
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millions
and 11, 2
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millions
. In the main, there is a minimal unequal
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number
of tennis viewership which is approximately fewer than 7
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millions
for each
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countries
. In converse, golf viewers, which has the visible disparity comparing to that of three remaining
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countries
, is 11, 2
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millions
of viewers. The opposite was true for motor racing and athletics. The total
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of
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motoracing
viewership is the least one which is 0, 5 times fewer than that of tennis. In the US.
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is the most considerable
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people
watching motor racing in its category comparing to the total
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of three remaining
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countries
. In terms of athletics, it can be
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seen
a marginal disproportion of each four
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contribution altogether.
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Meanwhile
the highest data provided for this category is 5, 5
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in
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USA
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