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describe the figure off making noodles

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The presented figure is a diagram showing the 8 stages of manufacturing instant noodles in a factory. All the way from the flour entering the Storage units to packing and labeling the products. For starters the flour brought by special trucks are transferred to Silos for storing purposes. After that in time of need flour is then transferred into a mixer along with some water and oil in order to make the dough. The dough then passes through rollers so that it is flattened. After the dough is flattened into sheets it is cut along the way into Stripes. Afterwards the dough stripes are woven into disc shapes and are ready for the cooking and packaging Process. The Noodle discs are cooked using oil which subsequently are dried off. Then Later on the cooked and dried noodles are put into cups where Vegetables and spices are added to them. For the final stage The cups of noodles are sealed and labeled.

The presented figure is a diagram showing the 8 stages of manufacturing instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 in a factory. All the way from the flour entering the Storage units to packing and labeling the products.

For starters the flour brought by special trucks are transferred
 to Silos for storing purposes. After that in time of need flour is then

transferred into a mixer along with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 water and oil in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 then passes through rollers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it is flattened
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
is flattened
 into sheets it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 along the way into Stripes. Afterwards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 stripes are woven
 into disc shapes and are ready for the cooking and packaging Process.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
Noodle
 discs are cooked
 using oil which subsequently
are dried
 off. Then Later on the cooked and dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are put
 into cups where Vegetables and spices are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to them. For the final stage The cups of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are sealed
 and labeled. 