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describe the change of Pentland from1980 to 2007

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The maps illustrate how many changes that took place in Pentland between 1980 to 2007. Overall, Pentland underwent a number of dramatic changes and the most important of which were the construction of accommodation cared for the increase in the population and the appearance of recreational facilities cared for entertainment. On the north, the sea was turned into the yacht marina. The west-north had a lot of noticeable changes with the park was built on the expense of the opened spaced, and the Industrial area being converted into the multi-storey car park, which was accompanied by swimming pool and many shops. On the west-south, the grassland was developed into the cinema and a shop. On the east-north, the grassland was changed into apartments and many shops. The car park on the east was demolished. On the east-south, the grassland was divided into two areas and made room for the houses and many shops.
The maps illustrate how
many
changes
that took place in
Pentland
between 1980 to 2007
.
Overall
,
Pentland
underwent a number of dramatic
changes
and the most
important
of which were the construction of accommodation cared for the increase in the population and the appearance of recreational facilities cared for entertainment.

On the north, the sea
was turned
into the yacht marina. The west-north had
a lot of
noticeable
changes
with the park
was built
on the expense of the opened spaced, and the Industrial area
being converted
into the
multi-storey
car park, which
was accompanied
by swimming pool and
many
shops. On the west-south, the grassland
was developed
into the cinema and a shop.

On the east-north, the grassland was
changed
into apartments and
many
shops. The car park on the east
was demolished
. On the east-south, the grassland
was divided
into two areas and made room for the
houses
and
many
shops.
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IELTS academic describe the change of Pentland from1980 to 2007

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3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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