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Describe about data japan and malasia spent theirs income on sources.

Describe about data japan and malasia spent theirs income on sources. d97X6

The pie chart depicts about data of japan and malasia invest their money on five different types of sources. Overall, It is apparent to the, The japan has spent their highest income on other goods and services similarly malasia has expenditures their more value on housing. While both of country they have an invested lowest price in HealthCare. On one hand we can see the japan has an exactly more than half income expense in other goods and services and housing paid out 29 percentage and 21 percentage respectively. Malaysians people have an invested their income in housings and food more than half comparatively others sources, they paid out 34% and 27% alternatively. The japan has doubled expense their money in transport comparably malasia, Such as 10 % and 20% respectively. In that case both of nation expence their money price lowest in healthcare comparatively others powers stood at 3% to 6%. In terms of food, The malasia has expenditures their value 27 %. 21 percentage invested income in housings by japan.

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