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The Environment is very important for both human and animals. I think we must maintain the consistence of the environment because Day by day increase our population, on the other hand, raise environment pollution which is bad for environment. Day by day reduce our land and cut million of trees for modern globization. For this reason, increase air pollution which is harmful for human health. Oxygen levels are decreasing day by day, because people are not concern about the environment. People do not use proper plan, they throw the garbage any where and also the factory waste extraction without any plan as a result, a lot of stench spreads from here and increase air pollution. For the modern glovalization we are making lots of haritize building, mail and factory for this reson, have to use havy equipment and making noise which is extremely harmful for the environment. When we are go to travel bus or car people are making horn without any reason which is very bad for children. Water pollution increase day by day because people are not following the right rules. Industrial waste dumped in to the river without any recycling process. Moreover, all over the world increased demand for use plastics which is very bad for environment.
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must
maintain the consistence of the
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environment
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Day by day
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increase
our population,
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environment
pollution which is
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bad
for environment.

Day by day
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reduce
our land and
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cut
million of trees for modern
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globization
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,
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increase
air pollution which is harmful for human health. Oxygen levels are decreasing day by day,
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because
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people
are not concern about the
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environment
.
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People
do not
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use
proper plan, they throw the garbage
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any where
and
also
the factory waste extraction without any plan
as a result
,
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a lot of
stench spreads from here and
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increase
air pollution.

For the modern
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glovalization
we are making lots of
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haritize
building, mail and factory for this
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reson
,
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equipment and making noise which is
extremely
harmful for the
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environment
. When we are
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go
to travel bus or car
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people
are making horn without any reason which is
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very
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bad
for children.

Water pollution
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increase
day by day
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because
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people
are not following the right
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rules
. Industrial waste dumped in to the river without any recycling process.
Moreover
, all over the world increased demand for
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use
plastics which is
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bad
for
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IELTS academic how to Environment pullulation

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210 words
6.0
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