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Earning from exports by one country in year 2015 and 2016

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The given bar chart and tabular shows the exports of various products and the percentile of various changed. The survey was conducted in 2015 and 2016. To commence, earning from exports was categorised in various fields. In year 2015 the net worth pf petroleum and engineered goods was 61 billion dollars and 57 billion dollars. However, in 2016 both of them grasped almost same level, 60-61 billion dollar. On the other hand, agricultural and textiles products was 31 billion dollars and 27 billion dollars on the contrary by year 2016 farming remain the same whereas textile goods Stretched themselves to 31 billion dollars. Gems and jewellery were the mediocre started with 42 billion dollar dropped slightly by 1 billion in 2016. In addition, there were various ups and downs in the percentage of goods exported. Petroleum, engineered and textiles saw an increasing trend with 3%, 8. 5% and 15. 24%. While gems and jewellery were in a loss of 5. 1 % and agricultural with a minimum loss about 0. 81%. Overall, the chart clearly shows that petroleum was the most earned sector whereas textile industry has a drastic rise in his production by year 2016.
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products and the percentile of
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fields. In year 2015 the net worth pf petroleum and engineered
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was 61
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billion
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and 57
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.
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, in 2016 both of them grasped almost same level, 60-61
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.
On the other hand
, agricultural and
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products was 31
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and 27
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on the contrary
by year 2016 farming remain the same whereas
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textile
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goods
Stretched themselves to 31
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. Gems and
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were the mediocre
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with 42
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dropped
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billion
in 2016.

In addition
, there were
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various
ups and downs in the percentage of
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exported. Petroleum, engineered and
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textiles
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saw
an increasing trend with 3%, 8. 5% and 15. 24%. While gems and
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jewellery
were in a loss of 5. 1 % and agricultural with a minimum loss about 0. 81%.

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shows
that petroleum was the most earned sector whereas
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textile
industry has a drastic rise in his production by year 2016.
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