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DESCRIBE A PERSON YOU ADMIRE

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Generally, we all have a person to admire and to me this person is my mother. She is thirty-eight years old. She has long black hair with a round face. Besides, she is relatively short, which makes her look extremely young in spite of being near fourty. My mom is as gentle as a lamp. She always talks to everyone with a sweet, soft voice. Besides, she is a sociable woman with a great sense of humour who always makes conversations more attractive and interesting. Moreover, she is a wise and enthusiastic mother. That is the reason why I always ask for her advice whenever I have difficulty making a decision. Last but not least, she is always the one loving her children unconditionally. She devoted her entire time for raising and educating me and my two younger sisters, which makes her is the irreplaceable one in my heart. My mother has played a vital role in my growth, and she will be the one I admire and adore in my whole life.
Generally
, we all have a person to admire and to me this person is my mother. She is thirty-eight years
old
. She has long black hair with a round face.
Besides
, she is
relatively
short, which
makes
her look
extremely
young
in spite of
being near
fourty
. My mom is as gentle as a lamp. She always talks to everyone with a sweet, soft voice.
Besides
, she is a sociable woman with a great sense of
humour
who always
makes
conversations more attractive and interesting.
Moreover
, she is a wise and enthusiastic mother.
That is
the reason why I always
ask for
her advice whenever I have difficulty making a decision. Last
but
not least, she is always the one loving her children
unconditionally
. She devoted her entire time for raising and educating me and my two younger sisters, which
makes
her is the irreplaceable one in my heart. My mother has played a vital role in my growth, and she will be the one I admire and adore in my whole life.
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IELTS academic DESCRIBE A PERSON YOU ADMIRE

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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