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A perfect vacation, in my opinion, is a type of vacation that would be thoroughly enjoyable and refreshing. Definitely, attractive destination where there are hordes of tourists make me tired so suburban or hometown is always my choice. To be honest my perfect idea of a holiday doesn’t include anything fancy except spending quality time with my family members and friends while forgetting about the worries about our worldly life for a while by lying on the grass, enjoying the fresh air or listening to the nature sound. In addition, my hometown takes 3 hours driving from my house so we usually get there by cars. The road to the suburban is always the most beautiful, there are tree roads pointing with little white flowers lead to my grandma’s home. My grandma has a little cottage house with a tiny cattle farm and a medium vegetable garden. We can spend all the time at there doing gardening work with my grandma till dusk, it’s definitely the best time of my life. In the evening is dinner time, all members around a table to share their own stories and having fun. Anyway, I think, it would be a perfect vacation for me because I would be able to do anything I want there. Besides, this vacation would allow me to enjoy little things with families and friends which don’t happen frequently when I am busy with my work life.
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, in my opinion, is a type of
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that would be
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enjoyable and refreshing. Definitely, attractive destination where there are hordes of tourists
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suburban or hometown is always my choice. To be honest my perfect
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of a holiday doesn’t include anything fancy except spending quality
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with my family members and friends while forgetting about the worries about our worldly life for a while by lying on the grass, enjoying the fresh air or listening to the nature sound.
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, my hometown takes 3 hours driving from my
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there by cars. The road to the suburban is always the most
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, there are tree roads pointing with
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white flowers lead to my grandma’s home. My grandma has a
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cottage
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with a tiny cattle farm and a medium vegetable garden. We can spend all the
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at there doing gardening work with my grandma till dusk, it’s definitely the best
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time
of my life. In the evening is dinner
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, all members around a table to share their
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stories and having fun. Anyway, I
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, it would be a perfect
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vacation
for me
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I would be able to do anything I want there.
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things with families and friends which don’t happen
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IELTS academic describe a perfect holiday

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1 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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