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Describe a past and present condition of Grange park.

Describe a past and present condition of Grange park. GMxaw

The set of maps illustrate a difference between past and present a public Grange park. Focusing on the details of 1920, the middle of attraction in the garden had fountain and in the left side stood on stage for musicians. The entry in the park at north and south side. The north side called Arnold avenue and the south side called eldon street. Therefore, the seating areas were allocated all the sides of Grange park. While the north-east side was located pond for water plants. The rest of rose garden had all the corner of the park except south-east. At observed, the huge development occurred in the Grange park. The rest of all the changes, the major correction is in middle of garden constructed rose garden and in the four side allocated seating areas. The additional changes is removed areas of stage for musicians and this place establish Amphitheatre for concerts. In the north-east side is build up children’s play area as well as restaurant. However, in 1920’s pond removed and create more attractive water feature with water –fall in south-east side. Moreover, the extra space is utilised in underground car park for visitors. Overall, it can be state that compared to 1920, in present more development occurs in the Grange park and utilize extra space for new facilities.

The set of maps Did you mean "illustrates"?illustrates
illustrate
 a difference between past and present a public Grange park.

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details
 of 1920, the middle of attraction in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 had fountain and in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side stood on stage for musicians. The entry in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 at north and south side. The north side called Arnold avenue and the south side called Possible spelling mistake found.EldonEltonWeldonElon
eldon
 street. Therefore
, the seating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
were allocated
 all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. While the north-east side was located
 pond for water plants. The rest of rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 had all the corner of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 except south-east.

At observed, the huge development occurred in the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. The rest of all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the major correction is in middle of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 constructed rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and in the four side allocated seating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. The additional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
is removed
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areas
 of stage for musicians and this place establish Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts. In the north-east side is build up children’s play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
as well
 as restaurant. However
, The article is probably missing here: "in the 1920’s".in the 1920’s
in 1920’s
 pond removed and create more attractive water feature with water –fall in south-east side. Moreover
, the extra space is Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
 in underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 for visitors.

Overall
, it can be state that compared to 1920, in present more development occurs in the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and Do not mix variants of the same word ('utilize' and 'utilise') within a single text.utilise
utilize
 extra space for new facilities. 