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The diagram shows how to build the tepee tent. Firstly, two sticks are tie with one stick using a rope. Secondly, upstand the three sticks into a tripod, one person holds a stick and another one binds the rope. Thirdly, repeat the same progress by wrapping the poles into one point. Next, when it can stand by itself, tighten the rope one last time. After that, bring out the canvas, erect it. Then, cover the frames with the canvas from right to left and from top till end. Before the final step, attach flaps of canvas with metal pins together. Finally, lock the canvas to a stake so the tent won't fly away. Overall, the diagram shows how a simple hut called a tepee is made in eight steps. From binding the cordage to staking the tent.
The diagram
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shows
how to build the tepee tent.

Firstly
, two
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sticks
are tie with one
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stick
using a rope.
Secondly
,
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upstand
the three
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sticks
into a tripod, one person holds a
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stick
and another one binds the rope.
Thirdly
, repeat the same progress by wrapping the poles into one point.
Next
, when it can stand by itself, tighten the rope one last time. After that, bring out the
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canvas
, erect it. Then, cover the frames with the
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canvas
from right to
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left
and from top till
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end
.
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Before
the final step, attach flaps of
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canvas
with metal pins together.
Finally
, lock the
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canvas
to a
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stake
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so
the tent won't
fly
away.

Overall
, the diagram
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shows
how a simple hut called a tepee
is made
in eight steps. From binding the cordage to staking the tent.

IELTS academic Descibe a Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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