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The assigned tabular chart depicts the statistical information regarding the proportion of households those owned different kinds of items in the Britain between 1972 and 1983.

The assigned tabular chart depicts the statistical information regarding the proportion of households those owned different kinds of items in the Britain between 1972 and 1983. JKwdB
The assigned tabular chart depicts the statistical information regarding the proportion of households those owned different kinds of items in the Britain between 1972 and 1983. As per the overall analysis, the highest percentage of houses had television, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner. Whereas the ratio of houses in terms of ownership of dishwasher lowest. Prima facia, it is lucid from the graph, in 1972, the figure for houses in order to possession of television significantly highest as compared to other all items, as years were passed ratio of houses those owned television increased dramatically during it reached 98%, while 87% of houses possessed vacuum cleaner in 1972. However, there was also abrupt incline seen till 1982 and accounted for 95%. Consequently, the percentage of houses those had the ownership of refrigerator and washing machine noticed the difference of 9% in the initial year. Surprisingly possession of both items in houses was rise constantly and comprised of 94%and 80% respectively in 1983. Moving further, 42% of houses had telephone in 1972, whilst this figure showed a rapid increment from 50% to 77% orderly. Subsequently, the minimum rise seen in the ownership of central heating in household it was 37%. Eventually, during 1983 64% of houses had central heating. Interesting to note that at the end of period 18%of houses had video and the proportion of houses was observed lower from 1978 to 1983 in order to owned dishwasher around 5%
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had television, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner.
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in terms of ownership of dishwasher lowest.
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, it is lucid from the graph, in 1972, the figure for
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houses
in order to possession of television
significantly
highest as compared to other all items, as years
were passed
ratio of
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houses
those
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owned
television increased
dramatically
during it reached 98%, while 87% of
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houses
possessed vacuum cleaner in 1972.
However
, there was
also
abrupt incline
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seen
till 1982 and accounted for 95%.
Consequently
, the percentage of
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houses
those had the ownership of refrigerator and washing machine noticed the difference of 9% in the initial year.
Surprisingly
possession of both items in
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houses
was rise
constantly
and comprised of 94%and 80%
respectively
in 1983. Moving
further
, 42% of
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houses
had telephone in 1972, whilst this figure
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showed
a rapid increment from 50% to 77% orderly.
Subsequently
, the minimum rise
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seen
in the ownership of central heating in household it was 37%.
Eventually
, during 1983 64% of
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houses
had central heating. Interesting to note that at the
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end
of period 18%of
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houses
had video and the proportion of
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was observed
lower from 1978 to 1983 in order to
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owned
dishwasher around 5%
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IELTS academic The assigned tabular chart depicts the statistical information regarding the proportion of households those owned different kinds of items in the Britain between 1972 and 1983.

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