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The bar chart shows data on coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in some cities of Australia.

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The bar chart illustrates information about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in different cities of Australia. Overall, Australian dwellers demonstrated an upward trend in terms of paying a visit to a cafe for coffe or tea in Melbourne, while the rate of buying fresh coffe stood steady in both Brisbane and Adelaide. In last 4 weeks, whereas instant coffee was sold a lot with just over 45% in Sydney, most of the people spent money on going to a cafe in order to buy either coffee or tea with not much more than 60%. However, the percentage of residents doubled in consumption of coffee and tea compared with fresh coffe with around 62%. It is interesting to note that in Adelaide, consumers who bought instant coffee and visited a cafe experienced similar results with approximately 50%. When it comes to Hobart, about 37% of city inhabitants purchased fresh coffe in a last month there. More importantly, the amount of people was higher in all areas to go to cafe compared to instant and fresh coffe.
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in Melbourne, while the rate of buying
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with around 62%.

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experienced similar results with approximately 50%. When it
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