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coverage of sport on tv discourages the young from taking part in any sport.

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In the era of technology, people have equipment that can provide information about any sports at any place, The television and many advanced technological devices are available which are useful to provide information about any sport from anywhere which are very useful. Nowadays, some young people start their sports journey from the television and imitate it in their life in various ways to be a perfect sports person. Many children have their idol which is aidful to be a good player of that particular sport. In some parts of the world, there are no amenities for some sports but on television, some young people can participate in the game and make themselves confident about that game and it will be very useful for their future. There are also some drawbacks of the television such as, A child wants to play cricket and their favourite team is losing some matches continuously so that child will lose their hope to join that sports and make a bad image of the sport in their mind which will diminish the interest in the game. In some rural areas, the game playing facility is not available which is inconvenient for some people who want to play that sport. There are many rules and regulations in that sport which implied by the country which is not good for that sports person and it will ruin the carrier of that person for the particular game which is useless In a nutshell, there are many different mindsets from person to person, which depend on creating and destroying the future of that sports person.
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have equipment that can provide information about any
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at any place,

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television
and
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advanced technological devices are available which are useful to provide information about any
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from anywhere which are
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useful. Nowadays,
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some
young
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people
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start
their
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sports
journey from the
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television
and imitate it in their life in various ways to be a perfect
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sports
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person
.
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children have their idol which is
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aidful
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player of that particular
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. In
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parts of the world, there are no amenities for
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some
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sports
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on
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television
,
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some
young
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people
can participate in the game and
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make
themselves confident about that game and it will be
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very
useful for their future.

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also
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drawbacks of the
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such as, A child wants to play cricket and their
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team is losing
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matches
continuously
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that child will lose their hope to
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join
that
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and
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bad
image of the
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in their mind which will diminish the interest in the game. In
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rural areas, the game playing facility is not available which is inconvenient for
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some
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people
who want to play that sport.

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rules
and regulations in that
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which implied by the country which is not
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good
for that
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sports
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person
and it will ruin the carrier of that
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person
for the particular game which is useless

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mindsets from
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to
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person
, which depend on creating and destroying the future of that
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person
.
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IELTS academic coverage of sport on tv discourages the young from taking part in any sport.

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