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Consumption of three kinds of spreads

Consumption of three kinds of spreads VyGEJ

The line graph stated the consumption of three kinds of spreads(Margarine, low fats and reduced spreads, and butter) over the 26-year period from 1981 to 2007 and consumption was measured in grams. In accordance with the graph, it is remarkable that the level of consumption of butter was higher than that of the other two spreads at the start of the period, nevertheless It fell and low fat and reduced spreads consumed most at the end of all the time given. As reported by graph, the consumption of proportion of butter initiated at 140 grams and peaked its highest at 160 grams in 1986, however it did not last long, seeing that It plunged to its lowest point of under 60 grams in the final year. In a like manner, the proportion of margine consumed started its point at under 100 grams and then it went up and down to its final point at 40 grams which was just under the butter’s consumption point. On the other hand, unlike above two spreads, the amount of consumption of low fats and reduced spreads didn’t established in the first year of the given timespan; Nonetheless, in spite of the fact that its consumption hit its starting point at 10 grams in just 1996. Then its consumption rise its peak of over 100 grams in 2001. Even though the graph showed a little bit decline in the consumption of proportion of low fats and reduced spreads, hitting its point of under 80 grams, its point was the highest consumption among these three spreads in the concluding year of the whole period.

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graph
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consumption
 of three kinds of spreads(Margarine, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
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fats
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdecreaseddiminishedshortened
reduced
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spreads
, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter)
 over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
26-year
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consumption
was measured
 in grams.

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graph
, it is remarkable that the level of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
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spreads
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start
 of the period, nevertheless
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low
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fat
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdecreaseddiminishedshortened
reduced
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spreads
 consumed most at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of all the time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
.

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graph
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
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 of proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
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grams
 and peaked its highest at 160 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 in 1986, however
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point
 of under 60 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
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year
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point
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 and then it went up and down to its final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
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grams
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butter’s
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consumption
 point.

On the other hand
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spreads
, the amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
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fats
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reduced
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spreads
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established
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year
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given
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timespan
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point
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grams
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just
 1996. Then its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexpenditureutilizationdrinking
consumption
 rise its peak of over 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 in 2001. Even though
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graph
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showed
 a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
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consumption
 of proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
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fats
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdecreaseddiminishedshortened
reduced
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spreads
, hitting its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstopmark
point
 of under 80 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
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point
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spreads
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 of the whole period. 