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Consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

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The given line graph illustrates the information regarding consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990. In 1970, the highest fast food was consumed by the UK was pizza. It was 300gram per week. Whereas the lowest fast food consumed in the UK were fish and hamburgers it was around 50 grams per week. However, consumption of hamburgers was increased to 150 grams per week in 1980. Whereas the consumption of pizzas was decreased to 200/grams each week in 1985. After that, it was slowly inclined and reached 210 grams per week by 1990. The use of hamburgers as fast food was also grown to 120 grams per week in 1985. From 1985 to 1990 it was rapidly inclined to 290 grams per week. Fish and chips consumption also went up to 500 grams per week from 1980 to 1990 in the UK. Overall, it can be concluded that consumption of fish and chips and hamburger show an upward trend. However, pizza shows a downward trend in the given period.
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in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

In 1970, the highest
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fast
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food
was consumed
by the UK was pizza. It was
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300gram
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. Whereas the lowest
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consumed in the UK were fish and hamburgers it was around 50
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grams
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.
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,
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consumption
of hamburgers
was increased
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in 1980.
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was decreased
to 200/grams each
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in 1985. After that, it was
slowly
inclined and reached 210
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by 1990. The
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in 1985. From 1985 to 1990 it was
rapidly
inclined to 290
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. Fish and chips
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also
went up to 500
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grams
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week
from 1980 to 1990 in the UK.

Overall
, it can
be concluded
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consumption
of fish and chips and hamburger
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an upward trend.
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IELTS academic Consumption of fast food in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

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3 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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