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Consumer durable owned in Britain

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The table bellow listed consumer durable start form 1972 to 1983. In general, the ownership was steadly increase. At the begening, ninty three percent of household has televition which is the highes among other equipment. The second, third and fourth position were belong to vacume cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine, respectively. Dishwashe seem not so popular or a priority for Britain, introduced 1978, the ownership just increase about 2 percent in the 5 years period with only 5 percent of house equiped with it.
The table bellow listed consumer durable
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start
form 1972 to 1983.
In general
, the ownership was
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steadly
increase. At the
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begening
,
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ninty
three percent of household has
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televition
which is the
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highes
among other equipment. The second, third and fourth position were
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belong
to
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vacume
cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine,
respectively
.
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Dishwashe
seem not
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so
popular or a priority for Britain, introduced 1978, the ownership
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just
increase about 2 percent in the 5 years period with
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only
5 percent of
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house
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equiped
with it.
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