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Task 1 writing for ielts preparsion

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The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the distribution of drinking water and salt water regarding to the their origin all around the world as well as the proportion of amount of water used in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for the purposes of agriculture, domestic consumption, and industrial usage. Overall, only 3% of all water in the world is fresh water and the rest of them is salt water. Moreover, 21% of fresh water can be found on surface or underground, whereas the reaming percentage belongs to ice and glaciers. Furthermore, the bar chart shows that the highest water consumption is for agriculture In both Saudi Arabia and Egypt while the highest amount of water usage in Canada is for industry. The pie charts show that the amount of fresh water can be reach in surface and on the ground is 1% and 20% respectively, while 79% of fresh water are in the form of ice and glaciers. The bar chart shows that domestic water usage in all three studied countries relatively is similar and are around 10%. while this item in Canada is just less than 10%. In addition, while Saudi Arabia and Egypt uses around 80% of their water for agriculture, Canada uses almost the same amount of water for its industrial purposes.
The two pie
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charts
and the bar
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chart
illustrate the distribution of drinking
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water
and salt
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water
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regarding to
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the their origin
all around the world
as well
as the proportion of
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amount
of
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water
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used
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for the purposes of agriculture, domestic consumption, and industrial usage.

Overall
,
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only
3% of all
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water
in the world is
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fresh
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water
and the rest of them is salt
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water
.
Moreover
, 21% of
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fresh
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water
can
be found
on surface or underground, whereas the reaming percentage belongs to ice and glaciers.
Furthermore
, the bar
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chart
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shows
that the highest
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water
consumption is for agriculture In both Saudi Arabia and Egypt while the highest
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amount
of
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water
usage in Canada is for industry.

The pie
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charts
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show
that the
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amount
of
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fresh
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water
can be reach in surface and on the ground is 1% and 20%
respectively
, while 79% of
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fresh
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water
are in the form of ice and glaciers.

The bar
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chart
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shows
that domestic
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water
usage in all three studied countries
relatively
is similar and are around 10%.
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while
this item in Canada is
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just
less than 10%.
In addition
, while Saudi Arabia and Egypt
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uses
around 80% of their
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water
for agriculture, Canada
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uses
almost the same
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amount
of
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water
for its industrial purposes.
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IELTS academic Task 1 writing for ielts preparsion

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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