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Task 1 writing for IELTS preparing Ny0yy

The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the distribution of drinking water and saltwater concerning their origin all around the world as well as the proportion of the amount of water used in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agriculture, domestic consumption, and industrial usage in percentage. Overall, only 3% of all water in the world is fresh water and the rest of them is saltwater. Moreover, 21% of freshwater can be found on the surface or underground, whereas the reaming percentage belongs to ice and glaciers. Furthermore, the bar chart shows that the highest water consumption is for agriculture in both Saudi Arabia and Egypt while the highest amount of water usage in Canada is for the industry. The pie charts show that the amount of fresh water that can be reached on the surface and the ground is 1% and 20% respectively, while 79% of freshwater is in the form of ice and glaciers. The bar chart shows that domestic water usage in all three studied countries relatively is similar and is around 10%. While this item in Canada is merely less than 10%. In addition, while Saudi Arabia and Egypt use around 80% of their water for agriculture, Canada uses almost the same amount of water for its industrial purposes.

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 in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada for agriculture, domestic consumption, and industrial usage in percentage.

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 and the rest of them is saltwater. Moreover
, 21% of freshwater can be found
 on the surface or underground, whereas the reaming percentage belongs to ice and glaciers. Furthermore
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 that the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 consumption is for agriculture in both Saudi Arabia and Egypt while the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
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 usage in Canada is for the industry.

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charts
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 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 that can be reached
 on the surface and the ground is 1% and 20% respectively
, while 79% of freshwater is in the form of ice and glaciers.

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chart
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shows
 that domestic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 usage in all three studied countries relatively
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While
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uses
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 for its industrial purposes. 