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The graph below shows the wheat exports in three countries during the year 1985-1990 in millions of tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the wheat exports in three countries during the year 1985-1990 in millions of tonnes. WEXx0
The given line graph illustrates the variation in the amount of wheat exported from 1985 to 1990 in three countries. Overall, European community witnesses a significant growth in its wheat export while in Australia shows an opposite trend. In contrast, there were major fluctuations in the wheat exports of Canada. As transparent from the graph, in the first one year, the amount of wheat exported in European Community and Canada depicts a significant decrease with above and under 15 million of tones, respectively. While there was a slight growth of wheat exports in Australia in a period of 5 years. In the next four years from 1986 to 1989, it witnesses a fluctuation change in three countries. The noteworthy is the fact that rice products climbed sharply and reached the highest point of 25 million of tones in 1988 then dropped dramatically in the following year. In the same period, a minimal increase of wheat exports was showed in European Community however it remained stable at 15 million of tones from 1987 to 1988. By contrast, the amount of wheat exported decreased to over 10 million of tones in Australia. In the last one year of 5-year period, European Community and Canada illustrates a significant rise and records nearly 20 million of tones wheat exports. While the rice products of Australia remained the same level at over 10 million of tones. To sum up, this line graph witnesses a different change in the amount of wheat exports in three countries. European Community, Australia and Canada shows the increase, go down speed and a levelling out, respectively.
The
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given
line graph illustrates the variation in the
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amount
of
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wheat
exported from 1985 to 1990 in three countries.

Overall
, European
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community
witnesses a significant growth in its
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wheat
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export
while in Australia
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shows
an opposite trend.
In contrast
, there were major fluctuations in the
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wheat
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exports
of Canada.

As transparent from the graph, in the
first
one
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year
, the
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amount
of
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wheat
exported in European
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Community
and Canada depicts a significant decrease with above and under 15
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million
of
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tones
,
respectively
.
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While
there was a slight growth of
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wheat
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exports
in Australia in a period of 5 years.

In the
next
four years from 1986 to 1989, it witnesses a fluctuation
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change
in three countries. The noteworthy is the fact that rice products climbed
sharply
and reached the highest point of 25
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million
of
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tones
in 1988 then dropped
dramatically
in the following
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year
. In the same period, a minimal increase of
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wheat
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exports
was
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showed
in European
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Community
however
it remained stable at 15
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million
of
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tones
from 1987 to 1988. By contrast, the
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amount
of
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wheat
exported decreased to over 10
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million
of
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tones
in Australia.

In the last one
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year
of
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5-year
period, European
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Community
and Canada illustrates a significant rise and records
nearly
20
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million
of
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tones
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wheat
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exports
.
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While
the rice products of Australia remained the same level at over 10
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million
of tones.

To sum up, this line graph witnesses a
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different
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change
in the
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amount
of
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wheat
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exports
in three countries. European
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Community
, Australia and Canada
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shows
the increase, go down speed and a levelling out,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the wheat exports in three countries during the year 1985-1990 in millions of tonnes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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