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Comparison between building plans

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The given diagrams depict the changes proposed for the ground floor of a building work. It is evident from the diagrams that the kitchen and the living room are situated in the same areas. However, kitchen is a bit modified to add kitchen furniture to it's western area. The area between kitchen and living room was previously consisting of hall and stairs. Whereas in the proposed changes, the same area consists of stairs occupies the northern part of the area. While the internal doors which previously opened out to the kitchen and living room are now in the sourthern-west part of the area. The internal wall separating the living room from the central area is going to be removed as per the proposed plan. The internal wall separating the kitchen from the central area is going to be shortened to accomodate internal doors which open out to the central area. The entrance doors are going to be located in the same places as before.
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given
diagrams depict the
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changes
proposed for the
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ground floor
of a building work.

It is evident from the diagrams that the
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kitchen
and the
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living
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room
are situated
in the same
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areas
.
However
,
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kitchen
is a bit modified to
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add
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kitchen
furniture to it's western
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area
. The
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area
between
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kitchen
and
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living
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room
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was previously consisting
of hall and stairs. Whereas in the proposed
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changes
, the same
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area
consists of stairs occupies the northern part of the
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area
. While the
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internal
doors which previously opened out to the
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kitchen
and
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living
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room
are
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now
in the
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sourthern-west
part of the
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area
. The
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internal
wall separating the
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living
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room
from the central
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area
is going to
be removed
as per the proposed plan. The
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internal
wall separating the
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kitchen
from the central
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area
is going to
be shortened
to
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accomodate
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internal
doors which open out to the central
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area
.
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The
entrance doors are going to
be located
in the same places as
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before
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IELTS academic Comparison between building plans

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