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Comparing graphs about Oscar nominees and colors in dress

The first graph shows which brands the Oscar nominees prefer to wear. The second graph introduce what colors were most common in dresses at the Oscar award from 2005 to 2014. Сlothes by the most famous red-carpet designers more common during nominations than at awards. Black, white and blue were the most popular outfit colors worn by celebrities in the years shown on the graph. Armani and Lanvin are the most often seen in nominations. They are worn by 5-6 people. Other brands are fall behind them. So clothes by Prada, Christian Dior, Marchesa, Valentino wear 16 nominees (4 outfits for each brands). Other designers' clothes are worn by 3 people per brand. At the awards two celebrities put on outfits by Prada (the same with Christian Dior, Lanvin, Tadashi Shoji. Three persons were wearing clothes by Armani, Marchesa and Valentino. And not a single person put on Badgley Mischka, Versace, Dries Van Noten or Elie Saab clothes. Blue dresses were worn by 19. 0% celebrities. Second most popular white (14%) and black (11%). Silver (8. 0%) and red (10%) on third place. Brown (6. 0%), green (6. 0%), gold (7. 0%), pink (6. 0%) and multicolor (5. 0%) were less common. Most unpopular dress color from 2005 to 2014 was purple. People in purple dresses made up only 4 percent. Based on the data of the first graph I can say that the most famous red-carpet designers are Armani (on the nominations) and Prada, Christian Dior, Lanvin and Tadashi Shoji (on the awards). From 2005 to 2014 most popular color was blue and most unpopular was purple.
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the Oscar nominees prefer to wear. The second graph introduce what colors were most common in
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at the Oscar
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from 2005 to 2014.

Сlothes by the most
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red-carpet designers more common during nominations than at
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. Black, white and blue were the most popular outfit colors
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by celebrities in the years shown on the graph.

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in nominations. They are
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clothes by Prada, Christian Dior, Marchesa, Valentino wear 16 nominees (4 outfits for each
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two celebrities put on outfits by Prada (the same with Christian Dior, Lanvin, Tadashi Shoji. Three persons were wearing clothes by Armani, Marchesa and Valentino. And not a single person put on Badgley Mischka, Versace, Dries Van Noten or Elie Saab clothes.

Blue
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by 19. 0% celebrities. Second most popular white (14%) and black (11%). Silver (8. 0%) and red (10%) on third place. Brown (6. 0%), green (6. 0%), gold (7. 0%), pink (6. 0%) and multicolor (5. 0%) were less common. Most unpopular
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from 2005 to 2014 was purple.
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Based on the data of the
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red-carpet designers are Armani (on the nominations) and Prada, Christian Dior, Lanvin and Tadashi Shoji (on the
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. From 2005 to 2014 most popular
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was blue and most unpopular was purple.

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