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The map illustrates the changes of an island over a certain period. As can be seen from the picture, while the natural environment has been preserved, the island has been transformed completely into a more modern one with various new places to meet the different requirements of the residents. In the center of this area, there is a reception surrounded by a vehicle track, with a restaurant on its north side. Six accommodations have been constructed on the west, connecting with each other through a footpath. Farther to the west, the beach now has allowed people to swim in. On the east of the island, a group of houses gathered in a circle, lined with coconut trees. From the reception, people can walk along the footpath to the new pier which is built on the edge of the south beach.
The map illustrates the
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changes
of an island over a certain period. As can be
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seen
from the picture, while the natural environment has
been preserved
, the island has
been transformed
completely into a more modern one with various new places to
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meet
the
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different
requirements of the residents.

In the center of this area, there is a reception surrounded by a vehicle
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track
, with a restaurant on its north side. Six accommodations have
been constructed
on the west, connecting with each other through a footpath. Farther to the west, the beach
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now
has
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allowed
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people
to swim in.

On the east of the island, a group of
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houses
gathered in a circle, lined with coconut trees. From the reception,
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people
can walk along the footpath to the new pier which
is built
on the edge of the south beach.
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