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The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.

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The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. In 2005 the recycling rates of UK and Germany were nearly 35% and 20% respectively. Germany’s rate increase sharply throughout the period, exceeding France’s rate in 2009 and reaching almost 60% in the end of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007, and the remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015. In early 2005 the recycling rate of France (50%) was the highest among these three countries. However, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but France’s recycling rate was the lowest in the end of the period.
The line graph illustrates the regional household
recycling
rates
in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015.

In 2005 the
recycling
rates
of UK and Germany were
nearly
35% and 20%
respectively
. Germany’s
rate
increase
sharply
throughout the period, exceeding France’s
rate
in 2009 and reaching almost 60% in the
end
of the period. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK grew to 40% in 2007, and the remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.

In early 2005 the
recycling
rate
of France (50%) was the highest among these three countries.
However
, it
dramatically
declined to 30% in 2013. Then, there was a growth of 10% in 2015,
but
France’s
recycling
rate
was the lowest in the
end
of the period.
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