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The picture below shows the plan of new town

The picture below shows the plan of new town EN16M
The given map shows the plan of a new town. A cursory glance at the layout is enough to make it clear that the town is planned to be well connected and provide all facilities to people. It has been planned that the centre of the town will have some bus stands and parking lots. Four roads will emerge from the centre and lead to north, south, west and southeast. A ring road is also planned to go around the town. The housing areas are planned towards the inside and outside of the ring road. Four recreational areas are planned towards the south and one towards the east. Two industrial areas have also been planned, one on the southeast and one towards the northwest. These would provide job opportunities to people. Overall, the town is well designed as the transport facilities seem to provide good connectivity and the recreational centres would be there for entertainment. The industries in the suburbs would provide employment to people.
The
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map
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shows
the plan of a new
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town
. A cursory glance at the layout is
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enough
to
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it
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clear
that the
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town
is
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planned
to be
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well connected
and
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provide
all facilities to
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people
.

It has been
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planned
that the
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centre
of the
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town
will have
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some
bus stands and parking lots. Four roads will emerge from the
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centre
and lead to north, south, west and southeast. A ring road is
also
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planned
to go around the
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town
. The housing areas are
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planned
towards the inside and
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outside of
the ring road. Four recreational areas are
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planned
towards the south and one towards the east. Two industrial areas have
also
been
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planned
, one on the southeast and one towards the northwest. These would
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provide
job opportunities to
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people
.

Overall
, the
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town
is
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well designed
as the transport facilities seem to
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provide
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good
connectivity and the recreational
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centres
would be there for entertainment. The industries in the suburbs would
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provide
employment to
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people
.
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