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coffee shop sales according to the table given in different time periods

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The table provide data on the sales made by a coffee shop on normal weekdays. coffee shop sale are broken down into four groups including coffee, tea, pastries, and sandwiches which are sold in 4 different time periods beginning from 7: 30 a. m. to 8: 30 p. m. overall, coffee shop sells coffee, tea, and pastries mostly from 7: 30 a. m. to 10: 30 a. m. , accounting for $265 $110 and $275 respectively. on the other hand, sandwiches are sold more from 10: 30 to 12: 30, which is about $200. in terms of the least sales, tea and sandwiches are at minimum from 2: 30 to 5: 30 p. m. however pastries are sold the least from 5: 30 to 8: 30 p. m. among all food and beverages pastries are sold the best for about $275, which is a litre more than coffee sales. According to the table, coffee is the most preferred drink especially in the morning, 7: 30 to 10: 30. however, tea has just been sold less than half of that of coffee, which is about $110. pastries are the best sold among all, about $275, whereas sandwiches have just been sold $200 another time is that pastriez of better in the morning but sandwiches are concerned more at noon. T
The table provide data on the
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sales
made by a
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coffee
shop on normal weekdays.
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coffee
shop
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sale
are broken
down into four groups including
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coffee
,
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tea
,
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pastries
, and sandwiches which
are sold
in 4
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different
time periods beginning from 7: 30 a. m. to 8: 30 p. m.
overall
,
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coffee
shop sells
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coffee
,
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tea
, and
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pastries
mostly
from 7: 30 a. m. to 10: 30 a. m.
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,
accounting for $
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110 and $275
respectively
.
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on
the other hand, sandwiches
are sold
more from 10: 30 to 12: 30, which is about $200.
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in
terms of the least
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sales
,
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tea
and sandwiches are at minimum from 2: 30 to 5: 30 p. m.
however
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pastries
are sold
the least from 5: 30 to 8: 30 p. m. among all food and beverages
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pastries
are sold
the best for about $275, which is a
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litre
more than
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coffee
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sales
. According to the table,
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coffee
is the most preferred drink
especially
in the morning, 7: 30 to 10: 30.
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however
,
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tea
has
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just
been sold
less than half of that of
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coffee
, which is about $110.
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pastries
are the best sold among all, about $275, whereas sandwiches have
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just
been sold
$200 another time is that
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pastriez
of better in the morning
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but
sandwiches
are concerned
more at noon. T
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IELTS academic coffee shop sales according to the table given in different time periods

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