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COFFEE AND TEA BUYING IN AUSTRALIA

COFFEE AND TEA BUYING IN AUSTRALIA 66W1K
The followin bar graph shows about the buying of cofee and tea in five citis in australia. The data represent of five cities in Australia. the surveyed data is about of 4 weeks. firstly SYDNEY HAS AN AVERAGE percentage of 42% brought fress coffee in last for weeks. and had instant coffee in last four week and had about 60% of poppulation of sydney went for cafe for cofee or tae for last four week. Melbourne has and averegly bought fresh cofee about 40% in last four weeek and 45% of poppulation had an instant cofee in last four weekand melbourne has maximum percentage in five cities in last 4 week went fro coffee in cafe or tea in in last four weeek. moreover, BRISBANE has minimum 35% of fresh coffee and had instant coffee of about 55% with and same as 55% went for cafe for tea. Adelaid has min 35% of fresh coffeee nd maximum percentage of 50% of instant cofee ans samely went for cafe for tae or coffee. lastly HObart is the fifth city which 35% fresh coffee and 55% instant cofee, 65% went for coffee in cafe. in conclusion most of the people in australia went in cafe for tea or cofee in last four week. and minimum number of populatin bought fresh coffee.
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surveyed data is about of 4 weeks.

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firstly
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in last for weeks.

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in last four week and had about 60% of
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for
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for last four week. Melbourne has and
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about 40% in last four
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and 45% of
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moreover
, BRISBANE has minimum 35% of
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and had instant
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of about 55% with and same as 55%
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has min 35% of
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of 50% of instant
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lastly
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is the fifth city which 35%
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, 65%
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in last four week.

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