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Coffee and Tea Buying and Drinking Habits

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The bar graph illustrates the result of an investigation about those who buy and drink coffee and tea in five Australian cities. Overall, the percentage of city residents who have the habits to go to a café is higher than the other habits such as buying instant coffee and fresh coffee in Australian cities except Adelaide. As for the percentage of people who go to a café in 4 weeks, Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart are more than 60 percent, while the other two cities are around 50 %. On the other hand, the percentage of city residents who have the habits to buy fresh coffee and instant coffee is not so common compared with a café, although these percentage is above 30 percent in all cities. In conclusion, it is shown that people in the Australia cities love to drink coffee and tea, and they often go to a café more than buy instant coffee and fresh coffee.
The bar graph illustrates the result of an investigation about those
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of city residents
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have the habits to go to a café is higher than the other habits such as buying instant
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in Australian
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go to a café in 4 weeks, Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart are more than 60 percent, while the other two
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IELTS academic Coffee and Tea Buying and Drinking Habits

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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