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coffee and tea buying and drinking habitats in five cities in australia

The given graph is about the purchasing and consuming coffee and tea in five different locations in Australia. It is the comparison between buying fresh coffee, instant coffee or went for a café for coffee or tea in the past 4 weeks. The first option is buying fresh coffee, Sydney has the highest percentage, Melbourne has the second highest percentage and remaining are considerably around the same level.
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, Sydney has the highest percentage, Melbourne has the second highest percentage and remaining are
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around the same level.
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IELTS academic coffee and tea buying and drinking habitats in five cities in australia

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  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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