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the table shows clothing in 5 countries. education. food and other things.

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The given table chart demonstrates some activities such as eating food or clothing and education that people did in 5 areas during year 2002. Overall, it can be seen from the gray and white table, the highest percentage was for Turkish people by buying more food, drinks, and tobacco. The lowest amount has belonged to Spanish people with less usage of educational goods. Focusing on the Food, drinks, and tobacco, its former percentage has belonged to Turkey and the latter rate was related to Sweden. About the clothing factor, it was in the highly level in Italy, and the low rate in the Sweden, at 5. 40%. As for the leisure and education, it has been in a high proportion in Turkey, and the lowest ranking in the Spain and Ireland. The amount of the clothing has consumed by people in Turkey, is proximately more than Sweden.
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by buying more food, drinks, and tobacco. The lowest amount has belonged to Spanish
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Focusing on the Food, drinks, and tobacco, its former percentage has belonged to Turkey and the latter rate
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