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Choreleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of village

Choreleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of village 9yyj
The map shows how a village called chorleywood developed over a period of 126years. Overall, it saw considerable growth, both in the establishment of the new residential area and transportation routes, which occurred over four phases. From 1868to1883 there was only two main roads in the region with choorleywood covering a small area along one of them. Over the next 40years, the villagegrew south ward alongside the road and a railway was built in 1909passing through this part. Choorleywood station is also located in this area of the village. Over the period between 1922and1970, the railway was the line along which the choorley wood expanded, both towards the east and west. However, the motorway was constructed in1970 parallel of the main road and further development of village occurred around it's intersection with the other main road and the railway between 1970and 1994. furthermore, chorleywood park and golf course is now located in area enclosed by the two main roads, the railway and this motorway.
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considerable growth, both in the establishment of the new residential
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and transportation routes, which occurred
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four phases. From 1868to1883 there was
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two
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main
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in the region with
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choorleywood
covering a
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villagegrew
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was the line along which the
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choorley
wood expanded, both towards the east and west.
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, the motorway
was constructed
in1970 parallel of the
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and
further
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between 1970and 1994.
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park and golf course is
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IELTS academic Choreleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map shows the development of village

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