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The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities. NJJ2
The table compares the average amount of time per day that men and women in the UK spend doing different activities. It is clear that people in the UK spend more time sleeping than doing any other daily activity. Also, there are significant differences between the time spent by men and women on employment/study and housework. On average, men and women in the UK sleep for about 8 hours per day. Leisure takes up the second largest proportion of their time. Men spend 5 hours and 25 minutes doing various leisure activities, such as watching TV or doing sport, while women have 4 hours and 53 minutes of leisure time. It is noticeable that men work or study for an average of 79 minutes more than women every day. By contrast, women spend 79 minutes more than men doing housework, and they spend over twice as much time looking after children.
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in the UK
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in the UK
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sleeping than
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any other daily activity.
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spent by
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and
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on employment/study

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housework.

On average,
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in the UK sleep for about 8 hours per day. Leisure takes up the
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5 hours and 25 minutes
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various leisure activities,

such as watching TV or
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sport, while
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have 4 hours and 53 minutes of leisure time.

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work or study for an average of 79 minutes more than
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every day. By

contrast,
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79 minutes more than
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housework, and they
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over twice as

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looking after children.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

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