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The table provides the information about three types of production, namly potatoes, cabbage and onions in five different countries in the year 2012.

The table provides the information about three types of production, namly potatoes, cabbage and onions in five different countries in the year 2012. mwwq
The table provides the information about three types of production, namly potatoes, cabbage and onions in five different countries in the year 2012. Overall, it can be seen from the table, China more produced vegetables also, Russian were second place while the both nations showed a good results than other countries. In Ireland produced potatoes at 72 mt as well as production cabbage were at 20 mt in this period onions were at 4 mt therefore, there were less than others vegetables. However, in Spain basically more produced cabbage there were at 200 mt. Thereafter, production of potatos were only at 2 mt but onions were not produced. In Brazil were main onions produced at 1417 mt after that potatoes were 3mr though cabbage were not produced. In Russia most biggest produced cabbage at 2765 tm and onions were at 2039 there had a most produced than potatoes. Finally, in China most produced potatoes at 9214 mt and cabbage were at 3187 mt onions were at 2602 mt. Wordcount-168
The table provides the information about three types of production,
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and onions in five
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produced
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results than other countries.

In Ireland
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produced
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potatoes
at 72 mt
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cabbage
were at 20 mt in this period onions were at 4 mt
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more
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produced
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cabbage
there were at 200 mt. Thereafter, production of
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were
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at 2 mt
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onions were not produced.

In Brazil were main onions
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at 1417 mt after that
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potatoes
were 3mr though
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cabbage
were not produced.

In Russia
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most biggest
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cabbage
at 2765
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potatoes
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potatoes
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were at 3187 mt onions were at 2602 mt.

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IELTS academic The table provides the information about three types of production, namly potatoes, cabbage and onions in five different countries in the year 2012.

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